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Trail kisses slowly down your neck
Your skin warms under my lips
Your chest rising faster every second
My hands caress your back
As your fingers dig into mine
Your panting turns to a light moan
When my lips find your chest
Bringing a blush of pleasure to your skin
You squirm as I trail kisses down your stomach
Arching into my lips
The thin sheen of sweet
Making each kiss cling
Lingering along with your moans
Your thighs quiver under my fingertips
As you quack under my lips
You drop in weakness
Then jerk to life
Gripping me tighter
I crawl up
Resting my forehead on yours
Staring into your eyes
And you pull me in…
To a kiss…
I guess technically this is erotic rather than romance.... though it isn't hardcore or anything. lol
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DeadlyDagon Featured By Owner May 29, 2011  Professional General Artist
I love it :) Great writing...
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nooj-deathseeker Featured By Owner May 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Why thank you
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DarkAngleRose Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
i want to know who were u thinkin about when u wrote this even if it was just off the top of ur head...
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MasterDesignz Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2009
Beautiful. Thats the only word I can use for this piece.
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nooj-deathseeker Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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MasterDesignz Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2009
You're welcome.
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rististien Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
wow, beautiful and a well embraced level of eroticism. It reminds me of a poem I wrote...
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nooj-deathseeker Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
thank you
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Simplistic-Illusion Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2009
Oh my...I like!
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nooj-deathseeker Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome
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Simplistic-Illusion Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2009
Haha!
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why-do-it-to-me Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
this is really good... did this come off the top of your head or did you work on this for a while?:toocool:
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nooj-deathseeker Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
it didnt take very long. just came off the top of my head more or less
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4everbroken Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
its romantic its romance in the sence of the joinging of flesh and lips love being told in an act of passion and did you mean quiver or did she really quack
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nooj-deathseeker Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
i meant quiver the first time and quack the second
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4everbroken Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
ok just checking cause the quack was lil random but it fit
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sapphire-blackrose Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I was sleeping but this is simply INCREDIBLE. OMG the emotion permeates throughout the whole piece and envelopes anyone that reads it. Simply magnificent Lance :D
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nooj-deathseeker Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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Angel-Shipmen Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I can't believe no one else has commented this. >.> Where are all of the ladies?!
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nooj-deathseeker Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
I wish i knew. lol
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Angel-Shipmen Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh..my..god. @_@
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nooj-deathseeker Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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