Trail kisses slowly down your neck
Your skin warms under my lips
Your chest rising faster every second
My hands caress your back
As your fingers dig into mine
Your panting turns to a light moan
When my lips find your chest
Bringing a blush of pleasure to your skin
You squirm as I trail kisses down your stomach
Arching into my lips
The thin sheen of sweet
Making each kiss cling
Lingering along with your moans
Your thighs quiver under my fingertips
As you quack under my lips
You drop in weakness
Then jerk to life
Gripping me tighter
I crawl up
Resting my forehead on yours
Staring into your eyes
And you pull me in
To a kiss
I guess technically this is erotic rather than romance.... though it isn't hardcore or anything. lol
I love it Great writing...
i want to know who were u thinkin about when u wrote this even if it was just off the top of ur head...
Beautiful. Thats the only word I can use for this piece.
wow, beautiful and a well embraced level of eroticism. It reminds me of a poem I wrote...
Oh my...I like!
this is really good... did this come off the top of your head or did you work on this for a while?
its romantic its romance in the sence of the joinging of flesh and lips love being told in an act of passion and did you mean quiver or did she really quack
i meant quiver the first time and quack the second
I was sleeping but this is simply INCREDIBLE. OMG the emotion permeates throughout the whole piece and envelopes anyone that reads it. Simply magnificent Lance
I can't believe no one else has commented this. >.> Where are all of the ladies?!